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Long John

Losing Every Thing Changes Everything

Developing a Hero

Jun13
by DBethel on 13 June 2014

Long John is a comic a little over a year in the making.  As a character, he is twelve years in the making.  I didn’t lie in the “About” page when I first saw him in a dream in 2002––though he looked much different in my head than in the drawing I made when I awoke.  In the dream, he was illustrated in a style that could best be described as a cartoonish Picasso painting with drifting facial features and chaotic proportions.  But that was it; Long John was just a cowboy in his underwear.

Development

Long John throughout the years. Click to enlarge.

Over the years since that dream, he has popped in and out, saying hi and leaving.  One time––around 2005––he popped up again, asking a simple question. I opened my sketchbook and wrote it down in the top left corner, “Who would steal a cowboy’s clothes?”  With that he became more than just a weird character; he became a story with plot and characters. In that sit-down, I created three pages packed equally with notes and drawings––a good summary of the type of creator I am.  After that, though, Long John went away for a long time.  It wasn’t until 2012 when he finally kicked in the door and told me he was ready to rock.

He looked different, but he looked serious this time.  After another few years of hard work and even harder decisions, Long John has become what he is today.

Visually, he has always kind of been what you would get if you stirred together the DNA of Clint Eastwood and Arnold Schwarzenegger––a monolith of a man with a stare squinted from the sun.  The only real changes have been his accessories.  For awhile he wore leather chaps, but I dropped them because they seemed to be a pain to draw and they covered him up too much.  He lost a gun at some point, too, especially when I decided his nickname existed before his predicament.  All of the other elements are pretty much the same: his long, squared jaw; his flat, wide-brimmed hat; the always-in-shadow-eyes; the busted button on the butt-flap.

The two most recent developments are things that mostly inform the character even if they don’t really make an appearance in the comic proper (well, one anyway).

First, his last name is Walker.  I’m a big fan of a 1968 neo-noir film called Point Blank which stars Lee Marvin and is directed by John “Deliverance” Boorman.  The movie is based on the Parker series of crime books by Richard Stark, which are being adapted into graphic novels by a huge influence of mine, Darwyn Cooke.  Though the character is only named as “Parker” in the novels, in the Boorman movie they puzzlingly renamed him “Walker.”  Having seen the movie first, that character––a normal man who becomes an enigmatic force of nature––heavily influenced the story of Long John.  So, I felt it was only fitting that my character would be named after Marvin’s. Plus, there’s a town called “Walker” just north of Bridgeport, CA, near Mono Lake. So, it feels like it all connects.

Assorted sketches from the last year of development. Click to enlarge.

Assorted sketches from the last year of development. Click to enlarge.

Another super important aspect of the series is the clothes that Long John got stolen from him.  They represent the man he is at the beginning of the story but once they’re gone he has to deal with who he actually is.  With that in mind, I had to develop his attire, something that had to be at once (dare I say) iconic but practical.  While I won’t share a picture with you yet, the best way I can describe the look I was going for is that it was guided by the idea that it was his “armor” in every sense of the word.

Developing Long John has been a surprising and rewarding experience and I’m still figuring a lot out about him as I go forward. But there are still small details (and broad strokes) that wink through the pages and show me the guy I met back in a dream in 2002

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Long John Announced! Begins June 24th!

Jun04
by DBethel on 4 June 2014


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Welcome to my new webcomic, Long John!

My name is D. Bethel (“Dan” to my friends) and I’m the writer/artist of what will be a strange noir/action/existential look at a western.

I have no idea who is coming to my site, which is always an exciting feeling.  Some of you may be fans from the previous comic, Eben07, that I created and wrote with Eben Burgoon as well as handled all the art duties.  I’d like to let those people know that Long John will be a little different from Eben07, a janitorial espionage action-humor webcomic (still on the web with over six years of content…go check it out, too!).  Long John does have a bit of an absurd premise, but it’s being played completely straight and earnest.  Just like any good story, there will be humorous moments mixed in with the serious stuff, but its more about telling this mystery-revenge story rather than trying to make you laugh.  But, if you liked my art and general visual storytelling tactics from before, you’ll feel right at home with this new comic.

Others may be brand new to me or my comics, and I welcome you, too!  If you’re a western fan, this comic combines all the stuff I love about westerns with the stuff I’ve always wanted to see in a western, mixing good, old-fashioned gunslinging with some serious character development–and some interesting twists along the way.  If you’re a fan of comics in general, I hope that when this updates you’ll add it to your reading list (and RSS feed when I get that up and running).

With that in mind, this website is still very much a work-in-progress.  I’ll be continually adding features to it and sprucing it up as I can, but I am a writer and artist with basically no aptitude nor talent for designing and programming things for the web.

So…why am I announcing this now?  To build buzz for the 24th.  I want as many people to show up on that first day and, more importantly, to know that first day is coming.

To keep interest going, I’ll be doing weekly blog posts (minimum!) on Tuesdays here on the site to give you some insight into the process of creating a brand new comic as well as to let you know about any updates to the site.  Just to let you know, I have started up a new weekly nerd news & discussion podcast with my friend, Andrew, called A Podcast [ , ] For All Intents and Purposes that you can check out and subscribe to (it’s on iTunes, too!).

To tide you over until the 24th, I assembled a little preview image from a few different pages in the first chapter.  Welcome to Long John everybody!

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